lunes, 1 de marzo de 2010

Desiree's Wedding

The Preparations for a weeding

The invitations were sent.

The order bride’s to make the dress in Victorio y Lucchino.

The, commissioning of the chocolate and cake and cream, they made chocolate cake and cream.

The bride made a collected beautiful.

At the San Sebastian was held the weeding.

In a park were taken the photos.

In the florist were ordered the flowed.

The weeding was held in the hall of the Andrada celebrations.


DESIREE MAIRENA RUIZ 4ºA

1 comentario:

  1. "The order bride’s to make the dress in Victorio y Lucchino". -->The dress was ordered by the bride in Vitorio and Lucchino.
    "The, commissioning of the chocolate and cake and cream, they made chocolate cake and cream." -> I don't know what you mean.
    "The bride made a collected beautiful." -> The bride made a beautiful collect??

    At the San Sebastian was held the weeding. -> Be careful with the SVC order. Your sentence shoul be like this: The wedding was held at San Sebastian.

    In a park were taken the photos. -> The same here: The photos were taken in a park

    In the florist were ordered the flowed.-> The same mistake: The flowers were ordered in the florist's

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